Idea for a movie script

[Rocklin]

Ok so the bank robbery thread reminded me of this idea I had years ago.   I saw some futuristic movie a few years ago that had a police force that carried no weapons because the population was disarmed and ordinary citizens never broke any laws.   

The first part of the movie opens into a safe deposit box room in 1959,   a young man rents a box and deposits some objects among which is a S&W model 10 with a box of ammo.  fade to black and we open to year 2030-2040 or something,   a strange turn of events has kept the bank from updating the safe deposit boxes for some reason and the contents of the box keep getting willed to the next man of the family after the previous owner dies.   nobody ever bothers to open the box based on explicit instructions from the wills of past family members.

our star of the movie is a 20 year old guy that never knew how to manage money so he relies on his parents to survive.   one day the parents die in a house fire and leave the son with nothing but funeral bills to pay and no bed to sleep in.     after weeks of living in his car he gets a letter in the mail from a lawyer that also contains the safe deposit box key.    soon he runs out of money and sells all his possessions just to make ends meet but its not enough and he soon becomes homeless.

he reads the letter that was sent from the lawyer and constantly looks at the key to the box till he snaps and visits the bank to open the box hoping to find big time money,   he takes the box to the private room and he can hardly contain his excitement and opens the box to discover what lies within.     he is shocked to find this old gun instead of money but he begins to think about strange things,   the police are never armed and people never commit crimes anymore due to the indoctrination of society.

It clicks in!

he loads the gun and places it in his pocket,  he returns the box and askes to see the manager.


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thats as far as i've got so far in imagining the story.   what do you guys think?
     

[Beany]

Could be good.
He'd prolly need to die in the end or something tho. Maybe he initially uses the gun to scare people into giving him money but then when he finally uses it it turns out he was holding it the wrong way around all along....... symbolising that all along he was actually robbing himself, of a decent life.

[Rocklin]

Could be good.
He'd prolly need to die in the end or something tho. Maybe he initially uses the gun to scare people into giving him money but then when he finally uses it it turns out he was holding it the wrong way around all along....... symbolising that all along he was actually robbing himself, of a decent life.

I agree,   I felt like making this a sad and depressing movie.   I think in the end he would end up getting killed or dying but right now I have to figure out what he is going to do with his money and ill gotten gains

[Flowerz]

Meh. I like the introduction scene/s in terms of setting the background, keeping the audience interested, and transitioning. I'm a bit sick of retarded, politically inspired concepts in movies though. The latest ones that come to mind are those purge movies. A future without any guns seems to be in the same vein of insanely unrealistic and semi political in nature and it makes me want to vomit. People loved those stupid purge movies though, so what do I know.

[Nigger Nostrils]

There's a little quaint town filled with whites, Mexicans, and Asians and everyone gets along. Then one day they notice blacks start moving in. The crime rate increases rapidly and every day they hear on the news of their women being raped. So the townsfolk band together and evict all of the niggers that moved in. This made the niggers angry so they called in the black panthers and started protesting. The protests gave the niggers an excuse to riot and loot and the townsfolk had enough and started shooting into the crowd. The niggers were quickly overpowered and their leader monkey was captured and lynched. Everyone lived happily after that.

[BallsDeep69]

There's a little quaint town filled with whites, Mexicans, and Asians and everyone gets along. Then one day they notice blacks start moving in. The crime rate increases rapidly and every day they hear on the news of their women being raped. So the townsfolk band together and evict all of the niggers that moved in. This made the niggers angry so they called in the black panthers and started protesting. The protests gave the niggers an excuse to riot and loot and the townsfolk had enough and started shooting into the crowd. The niggers were quickly overpowered and their leader monkey was captured and lynched. Everyone lived happily after that.

*claps*

[JasonVorhees]

There's a little quaint town filled with whites, Mexicans, and Asians and everyone gets along. Then one day they notice blacks start moving in. The crime rate increases rapidly and every day they hear on the news of their women being raped. So the townsfolk band together and evict all of the niggers that moved in. This made the niggers angry so they called in the black panthers and started protesting. The protests gave the niggers an excuse to riot and loot and the townsfolk had enough and started shooting into the crowd. The niggers were quickly overpowered and their leader monkey was captured and lynched. Everyone lived happily after that.

wats the title of the movie playa hata

[Nigger Nostrils]

There's a little quaint town filled with whites, Mexicans, and Asians and everyone gets along. Then one day they notice blacks start moving in. The crime rate increases rapidly and every day they hear on the news of their women being raped. So the townsfolk band together and evict all of the niggers that moved in. This made the niggers angry so they called in the black panthers and started protesting. The protests gave the niggers an excuse to riot and loot and the townsfolk had enough and started shooting into the crowd. The niggers were quickly overpowered and their leader monkey was captured and lynched. Everyone lived happily after that.

wats the title of the movie playa hata

Last of the mo-nkey hens